Spraynard Krueger

And Im new tooo! wheres my help?!

Hey alice, I liked this peice pretty good! Only a few things that I thought were a bit out of place, if you know what I mean. The idiots in ...

Hey, I think this is prolly the best vamp story Ive read on these types of sites. In the beginning you said you wanted the second story to be as ...

Let me start this off by saying I did not like this piece. And ill tell you why. The dialog comes out unnatural and the whole thing here is odd. ...

so you wrote this while you were drunk?? This all seems vagily familiar... where have I read this before... Hmmmm

hey im new here and this place looks really odd and closterphobic will somebody please tell me what im doing here

It was the only living occupant youre talking about wind here, and according to my diagnoses, wind is not a palpable living creature, but... a natural phenomenan that no one ...

A man was defecating on my England hotel room floor when I walked in. He looked over at me and squinted from the new light coming from the hallway. I ...

Hahaa, well I liked the intro but I kinda got bored, a preference thing. HOWEVER, I loved the bit where the mom just falls out of her chair... it reminded ...

Huh... Intresting thing this box is. But what I kinda wanna know is if she knew the box was there, was it the box she was looking for, and... i ...

Well obviously this was written by a 10 year old.. i mean... someone who knows how to write lol... so i guess i cant say anything about that.. but!... half ...

Conversely, I enjoy longer sentences, that is if theyre wrriten rightly and flow smoothly, and i didnt notice anything not having this quality in this work... so I would say ...